Sunday, May 19, 2013

A Controlling Boss, a Murder to Solve, and a Cold Case - #SampleSunday


The following excerpt is taken from TIES THAT BIND.  I hope you enjoy.
The call came when they got back to the car.  “So what have you got for me Knight?”
  She envisioned the Sergeant glancing impatiently at his watch.  Sometimes she regretted turning down promotions.  She could be a Sergeant herself had she been thinking straight.  But no, she claimed to be happy where she was positioned in life.
  “We’re leaning towards Laura Saunders’ murder being an isolated incident.  We have a reason to feel the ex-boyfriend is involved.”
  “So that’s your final answer to this?  In less than four hours you’re positive the rest of the city sleeps safe tonight?”
  What did this man want from her—a caped crusader?  No one could guarantee that.  It was always black and white with him.  She needed to operate within the shades of gray. 
  “Evidence seems to be pointing us in that direction.”
  “I want this wrapped up Knight, sooner than later.  Keep me informed.”
  He never spoke the words but the implication was there: Don’t let this case go cold like the other one.  Didn’t he know she tortured herself enough over that possibility?

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Friday, May 17, 2013

Forensic Friday: Gun Play

Do you think you know everything there is to know about guns and bullets?  I bet there are things you don’t know—unless it’s your job to know.  But as an author in the crime genre, it’s imperative to get the facts as straight as you can. 

I was fortunate enough to be contacted by an educated source who has offered to help me with detailed technical and forensic questions.  They are giving of their assistance free of charge.  I want to “pay it forward” and pass on what I learn.  I believe that’s fair. J

Here’s a few things I’ve learned already.

Clips and magazines are the NOT same.
Unless you’re active with guns, I doubt you knew that.  It’s common for online resources to use the words interchangeably but they couldn’t be more wrong. 

So what is the difference?
A clip holds bullets and goes into a magazine.

Here’s a video that may help you see this  clearly.


All bullets are NOT created equal
Bullets are designed to suit a purpose.  While I’m still very new in my knowledge of this area, my source has pointed out that there are bullets that are bonded and bullets that have full metal jackets (FMJ).  Of course, there are many other types but these are the two I’m going to touch on.

What is a jacket?
A jacket is a harder metal that encases a softer metal core.  Jacketed bullets are ideal for hard or soft targets, but if traveling through glass, for example, are likely to separate.

What is a bonded bullet?
A bonded bullet is when the jacket is fused to the softer metal core.  They cannot be separated.  Heat is one way this process is conducted.  Some bullets are even solid copper.  Bonded bullets are ideal for going through hard material such as glass or metal.

Wednesday, May 15, 2013

FEEL What You Write--Readers Experience the Difference


“When you feel it, your audience does.”
--Nicki Minaj

The above-noted advice was given to a contestant on a popular singing competition, but it applies to writing as well.  Here’s how.

Have there ever been days that you made yourself write?  I’m sure you know the days...when you have a goal you want to reach, you’re consumed by a word count and are determined to attain it whether you’re feeling it or not.  How do you feel about those scenes when you’re writing them?

Don’t get me wrong.  There are times when you make yourself write that something truly magical happens—the characters take over, bringing you with them in an unexpected, yet pleasant direction.  But there are times such writing sessions can result in mechanical writing.

Now contrary to that are the moments you are writing a scene and your heart is racing, your breathing speeds up, you can stop laughing, or tears fall down your cheeks.  You are truly caught up in what is befalling your characters.  I LOVE it when this happens!  And you know in those scenes if you’re feeling it as the author, it’s pouring out on the page.  This is investment and your readers will experience the difference!

Maybe you’re wondering how to tap into these emotions while writing?  I’m not sure if there’s an advice book or guidelines on how to reach that level of passion when writing; I believe it’s something that just happens when we let our creativity go. 

My advice to writers?  Write.  Let go of the so-called rules of the craft, free your spirit, and go with the flow of your story.  Most importantly—feel what you write.

Sunday, May 12, 2013

Your Mother's Going to Love this: #SampleSunday Tap Into Her Dark Side...


Assassination of a Dignitary by Carolyn Arnold
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Raymond Hunter's dark past has returned and demands one final favor. Now fifteen years later, settled as an accountant and family man, he assumed life would be calm. He thought wrong. The Italian Mafia wants him back.

The directions were simple: Kill Governor Behler and be out for good.

In order to protect his family and guard them from the truth, he has no choice but to accept the job. He picks the date and location—Niagara Falls, New York—two hundred and forty miles away. But by the time he returns home, he finds out the assassination attempt failed, his family has been kidnapped, and he has twenty-four hours to set things right if he wants to see them again.

With time running out, Raymond discovers the real reason they wanted Behler dead and finds out he’s placed himself and his family right in the middle of a mafia power struggle. What he doesn’t realize is that law enforcement is also closing in.


Excerpt of Chapter 2

I stood in the cover of darkness, tucked into a corner untouched by the glow of a street light or motion-sensor spotlight.  The house was a two-story brick but only home to one man. 
A man stood vigil in the corner of the porch.  There would be at least one more out back.  If Christian hadn’t changed, both men would be carrying AK-47s. 
But there would be no need to disturb them.
My heart fluttered with the adrenaline rush that used to fuel my soul on a regular basis as I contemplated the ascent to the second floor.  There were two large windows that would serve as a means to propel myself upward.  The brick’s mortar had become deeply inset over the years and allowed for a good toe hold.  I could have done things the easy way: placed a call and accepted the mission.  But I needed to prove that I wasn’t one to mess with either.  He violated my home; I would his.
I hoisted my legs onto the bottom window sill and spent a moment thankful I had kept in good physical shape.  I stood there, braced in front of the window, back to the world, vulnerable.  I heard something ruffle and realized the two guards were moving around.  I froze there while I struggled to study their movements by sound.  My heartbeat thumped in my eardrums and made it hard to hear.  I had to recall my breathing technique.  I had to tell myself that I had nothing to lose, just like before.  But so much had changed since then.  Brenda’s and the kids’ faces skipped through my thoughts, and I closed my eyes willing them to obscurity.
The men were still moving around.  I strained to hear.  As I focused, my heartbeat relaxed in my ears and receded into a dull hum.
“Carlos…pssstt Carlos.”
“What are you doing man?”
The second voice sounded paranoid and at unease.  Either he hadn’t been a soldier, or grunt, for long or he had been witness to Christian’s evil side.
“He’s sleeping man.  Relax.”
“Go back to your watch,” the one named Carlos said.
The more they spoke and the more they moved around, I feared they’d do a full perimeter search.  If they did, I would be dead.  One bullet to the back of the head, and I’d be fed to Mitchell, Christian’s pit bull.  At least that’s how the lucky intruders were disposed of in the past.  Betrayers of The Family never received the courtesy of the gun shot first.
Mitchell had likely passed, but Christian loved the breed and would have replaced him with a younger, hungrier version. 
They’re good at tearing flesh from bone, he told me.  Anything that can do that is worthy of my respect.
“You ever been to Popeye’s?  The girls are hot.”  The chatty soldier was from the front door.  This much I could tell.
“Please go back. Go.”
I heard the man return to the front, his feet crunching on the crushed shell driveway that Christian had demanded be shipped specifically for show.  Standard gravel would never suffice for a man like him.
I let the rush of air leave my lungs.  I placed my gloved hands on the brick and worked the toes of my shoes into the deep groves.  I made my way to the second story like a modern day Spider-Man.  As I reached for the sill of second window, I paused and listened.  My toe went into a slot, and I extended upward as far as I could reach.  I needed to go up another few bricks in height.  My hand reached the sill, but as I went to pull myself up, my grip slipped.
Shit!
I was hanging suspended, fifteen feet off the ground, by one arm.  I needed to maneuver my legs to the side, get them into a toe hold.  My body lost all willpower to move when I heard rustling in the bushes.
Shit!
My arm was aching like a son of a bitch.  The push-ups and bench presses at the gym hadn’t prepared my muscles for this workout.
I summoned my thoughts to go somewhere more tranquil.  They instantly jumped to Brenda—the smell of her perfume and the warmth of being in her arms.  The recollections weren’t helping as my resolve weakened.  I needed to rediscover the killer inside of me, and it wouldn’t come from thinking of my family.

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Sunday, April 21, 2013

A Gift to my Readers - Hart's Choice #women'sfic


Today through Tuesday, April 23rd, be sure to grab your FREE copy on Amazon and tell others about it!

For the lucky ones, there is a love so powerful that when it comes along, it changes everything.

As teenagers, just a chance meeting at a county fair, would change Barry and Tessa's lives forever. Yet with a summer romance that didn't fully blossom and ended without warning, two hearts were torn apart by time and circumstance.

Tessa pursued her love of dance and found herself a ballerina in the 1962 production of The Nutcracker in New York City. But she still thought of Barry. 

Reunited nearly a decade later, only to be ripped apart by war and loss, Tessa wonders if they will ever be together and dreams fulfilled.

18,000 words




Monday, April 1, 2013

"One Bulb at a Time" - Crucial Advice for Reaching Goals


One bulb at a time.  At least that’s how the story goes to explain the above field of daffodils.   Nearly one million were planted over a period of forty years.

Ever feel like you’re never going to accomplish your goals?  Sometimes we set rather large ones for ourselves--yet they are attainable. 

We’ve heard it said before, ‘break down larger goals into smaller ones’.  And the advice is sound.  Think about writing a novel.  The task may seem very daunting when you start out, but as the words start to flow, the story comes together, and before you know it you’ve written a full length novel.

Maybe you have yet to reach your goal of completing a novel.  Take heart.  A book may be made up of 60,000-100,000+ words, but when you break that down, what do you have?  One word at a time.

The same advice and mindset can be taken when in the editing process, which can sometimes feel more daunting than a first draft.

But maybe your struggle isn’t with your writing at this time.  Maybe it’s another goal you have.  You want to learn a new language?  Possibly your goal is to lose weight?  The possibilities are endless.

Why not adjust your thinking to the mindset of “one bulb at a time”, one day at a time...whatever applies to your situation, but you get the point.  Great things are only accomplished over time with determination and pacing.

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I thank my sister for sending me the email story about the daffodils which inspired this post.  Here's a link to a post that includes the true life story.

Wednesday, March 27, 2013

Sharing some pictures of my vacation in Cancun

Hubby and I haven't been away on a plane for 13 years...that was until March 16th when we boarded a plane for Cancun, Mexico!  And what an amazing week we had there.  

The resort we stayed at was wonderful.  The food was delicious, the drink was flowing, and a terrific highlight was everyone we met.  We must have met at least 50 people.  We met people from the United States, England, Argentina, Brazil, Russia, Germany, Australia, and other countries I'm sure I'm forgetting right now.

And even though communicating could be hard at times with language barriers, gestures and smiles go a long way.  It never hurts to have a toast with new friends either.  It would be wonderful if life was like this all the time, yet I can only imagine if I approached people in my city when at a bar and introduced myself, what the reaction would be....yeah, let's keep the site PG rated (unless my crime novels already graduated that rating?). LOL

Anyway, here are some pictures...

Yep, I just had to.  The beach and my feet are in the sand!

Sunrise and I believe those two seats were reserved for us.

Where we spent a good portion of our time...
soaking up the sun and drinking at the pool bar.

A view from our room down the beach.

Sunrise from our room.

We took 2 excursions.  One, to swim with the dolphins - no pictures yet, but wow! what an experience!  And two, we took a day trip to the Chichen Itza ruins.  This is one of the 7 wonders of the world.
 
The only circular building and it was designed to observe
stars and their alignments and cycles.

9 stories tall! And you clap your hands in front of a
staircase and it echos back the sound of their
sacred bird.  Surreal experience!

Not sure if you've ever seen the cartoon movie from
years ago, El Dorado, but they played this ball game.
I couldn't get over how huge the field was and
how high the "hoops" were. 

A natural underground well.  The water is approx 120-130 feet deep
and was freezing but we swam around for a bit.
We were on fire after Chichen Itza.  It's 90-some steps down
to reach the water.